enroll in a gym, sign up for a membership

Today, I went to a gym and subscribed in the gym. The entry fee was 2300000 idl. It is included their coaching program for 3 months. I am planed to return to Japan on January. So, the program for two months is in vain. I wad torn whether choosing the program or not. However, the coaching program is very cheap. If you apply the same one, you should pay money more than triple. I applied the program finally. The gym is clean. We can use towels you as much as you want. After excercise, we can take shower. A coach is friendly. His name is Dedan. I trained with a coach for the first time. Getting advice in English is hard, but I understand some.

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"Today, I went to a gym and signed up for a membership. The enrollment fee was 2,300,000 IDR, which includes their coaching program for three months. I'm planning to return to Japan in January, so the program for two months may go to waste. I was torn between choosing the program or not. However, the coaching program is very affordable. If you were to enroll in a similar one, you'd have to pay more than triple the amount. In the end, I decided to enroll in the program.

The gym is clean, and they provide as many towels as you need. After exercising, you can take a shower.

The coach is friendly, and his name is Dedan. It was my first time training with a coach. Getting advice in English is challenging, but I understood some of it."

"subscribe" は通常、定期的な情報提供に関連して使用され、"sign up for" はさまざまな種類の登録行為に関連して使用されるより一般的な表現です。

"enrollment fee" は長期的なメンバーシップやプログラムへの登録に関連し、"entry fee" は特定の場所やイベントへの入場に関連しています。

"go to waste" は、何かが無駄になる、台無しになる、または活用されないままになることを指します。特定の資源や機会が十分に活用されないか、効果的に利用されない場合に使用されます。例えば、時間、努力、お金、機会などが無駄になる状況を表現するのに使います。

"Affordable" は、財政的に手頃な価格である、支払い可能な、または手ごろな価格であるという意味を持つ形容詞です。

"provide towels as many as you need" は理解可能な表現ではありますが、少し自然でない部分があります。より自然な表現として以下のように言い換えることができます:

"the triple amount" という表現は少し不自然に聞こえます。通常、"triple" は数量を修飾する形容詞として使用され、"the" と組み合わせて "triple the amount" のように使われます。